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Question: Does part XII make things more clear!?
-Sin Seeker_
*Part XII~

Taint fell back,
laughed again
but something in his voice…
Unsure and cautious,
NOW was the time
for my choice!.
Among all the raucous
I sprang past three
baring ghosts
and expected them to spring
But they lingered back
and watched me run
upon a broken knee!.
My wounds bled steady
My breath came quick
The fires still burning
in my chest!.
A split in the way!
No sign from which to pick
and the sun
began to fade away!.
The map kept guiding
and I followed faithful
To stay on the road
would lead me to Miir!.
The scar of the demons,
Vengeance bred hateful
I drug on in anguish
while spilling my tears

I fell…
asleep…
dead…
I could not tell
but something caught me,
Someone gentle!.
They carried me on
through the night
and guarded
as some loyal sentinel
Could he be my angel!?

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The escape from the demons of hell is harrowing in this poem, and the words you use to tell the story are powerful!. "The scar of the demons,Vengeance bred hateful" are words that create intense images!. Then the falling, falling into sleep and into the arms of !.!.!.the angel!? Miir!? I love the potent image of the angel, "the loyal sentinal"!. This part of the poem does provide clarity but also raises the final question very vividly!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, this episode definitely makes it clear!. Thank you Siren, although, now, I have another question!. Vengeace, the one who told her of the Miir, is he now jealously guarding that knowlege and sending demons after our intrepid heroine!? Just a query!. This one is fast paced, all the better to deal with the escape from hell, yes, I understand, that makes it excellent!. Then you also did an amazing job of slowing it down in the second stanza, a gentle, exhausted, falling asleep!. Is the loyal angel the Miir!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

What!? Only one last night!. This one is definitely a page turner, but I don't have a page to turn to yet!. That was pretty sneaky Sis, way to keep me hanging on!. Usually I read these two or three at a time!. This morning I find !. !. !. I need more!. Who could this angel be!?
Oh yeah, your question!. Yes, things are much clearer, thank you!.
Looking forward to the morrow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

As has been pointed put by Eva, there are some suggestions of a darker force at work!.!.!. Vengeance, Jealousy, Taint!.!.!. are they all working for the 'Crown!?' The man who gave her the Map DID say that the crown would seek her out if she went on this road!.!.!. is the angel Miir, just to repeat what has already been asked!? I have to wonder because there are so many questions here!.!.!. I look forward tot he next!.!.!. is it REALLY drawing to a close!? I cannot help but ask, you have made something that makes us wonder!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com