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Position:Home>Poetry> Do you like my "sound poem" = /?Question: Do you like my "sound poem" = /!? we had to write a sound poem for my 7th grade english class portfolio!. heres what i came up with:
The grandfather clock keeps rhythm Tick!. Tick!. Tick!. With their pounding hearts!. The rain gently Tap!. Tap!. Tap!. Beats on the window The Fireplace Crackle!. Crackle!. Crackle!. Softly roars behind them Suddenly, their lips meet They kiss And for a moment, all is silent is it any good!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: It's awesome, though maybe you could change "crackle" to a one syllable word to make it flow better!? But you don't have to it's good the way it is!. ^_^Www@QuestionHome@Com maybe change crackle to crack!. other than that its goodWww@QuestionHome@Com awe its cute :] <3!.Www@QuestionHome@Com not really but creative!. I love that part!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com good enough for a 7th grader!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |