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Question: Poetry: Is it in You!?
Here I am, ready to show!.
Inside or out, it's all the same-
Denying nothing I already know,
Enjoying it all like it's a game!.
Blast of cold air in your face,
Electric shockwave ripped through space-
Holes, and glimpses, and shadows gone,
Incinerated by the breech of dawn
Now blinded by light, can't you see!?
Different is my kind of poetry!.
While you twist, and ravel, and knot,
Offering adornment to a hazy spot,
Remember me this- I leave nothing behind-
Doubts, and misgivings, and virtues you'll find
Solemnly displayed for all to see!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
stanza 2 and 3 enters into an angsty, punk culture!.!.!. although creative, it is not entirely poetic because the words seem more content to rest in their pronunciations rather than in their meaning!. it blends seriousness with convoluted meanings!.!.!. the reader thus finds it difficult to come to a conjecture and judge the poem from a particular standpoint!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I know how hard these damn things are - sustaining an argument, or an idea within the confines of the acrostic - well done!.
Some poets write to reveal themselves to others, whilst some poets do the complete opposite!. Both can bring something to the poetry table!.!.!.!.sometimes I am in the mood for a simple tale, simply told at other times I like a cryptic poem which leaves me pondering on what the words actually mean!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Tell us how you think and feel
Hide nothing now, you must reveal
In verses strong, with words so clear
Sing of hope, of love, of fear!.
If this is not your chosen task,
Say nothing then, but do not ask
Guard your feelings with subtle words
Offer platitudes, or a glib tautology
Over- think, like all the rest of the nerds!.
Don't ever give cause for a weak apology!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Different is my kind of poetry too my friend!.!.!.
This took some time eh!? Loved it, it had a beat and was written sw33t @)~>~Www@QuestionHome@Com
Dang! That's a lot of work!. Excellent work in my book!. Very Nice!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I thought it was goodWww@QuestionHome@Com
This is excellent, word find, All the way around! KudosWww@QuestionHome@Com