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Question: This is based on When Dove cry by Prince!. How is this; Only two lines are Princes!.!?
"deaf ears"


"How could you leave me standig,
standing out in the cold"
Sleet rains down on me
Freezing all of my love
Inside i am but a labyritnh!.
Lost in all of my thoughts
Prison of my creation
I cry to stone deaf ears,
all eyes, they turn away!.
I raise my eyes to the skies,
No one home to hear my prayers!.

"Maybe I'm just like my father,
he's never satistied!."
Maybe I';m just like my moher,
she's never satisfied" why do we yell at each other,
This is what it sounds like when doves cry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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i like it !.!.hugsWww@QuestionHome@Com

http://en!.wikipedia!.org/wiki/When_Doves_!.!.!.

Would this be what you are trying to impart in your poem!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

this is amazing for a song lyrics!.!.!. but too lyrical and cliche to qualify as a poemWww@QuestionHome@Com