So i need some help with this poem....?

Question: So i need some help with this poem!.!.!.!.!?

i got bored and i started a poem!. i have no idea where i am going with this though!. its starts like this!.!.!.

breaking hearts, twisting minds
lies pouring out of his ears
such a beautiful boy but theres more then meets the eye
harsh words could truly kill
he reeks of pure arrogance

any help :)

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

ooo!.!.i like it! How about this added!?

his head is held so high
that pride! where did it come from!?
just ask the girls left behindWww@QuestionHome@Com