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Question: Do you like my poem!.!.!.rate it 1 - 10!?
I'm 12 and I like to write so!.!.!.read and rate!.
Ignorant, illiterate, unconscious!.
It’s like today’s society is delirious!.
I’m serious!
When I had cancer I thought it was over with!.
I had a chance to see my life go back over it!.
I wanted to see what I did wrong and what I did right!.
Because I felt contrite!.
Like the way I feel every night
I try not to do things wrong!.
That’s why I have to elong!.
Stay away from negative peers!.
That’s why I stand -- although alone,
With no tears, no fear!.
No one can tell me how to act or dress!.
Yes, that may cause stress!.
But never to less!.
I’m unique!.
Different from everyone
And that’s what makes me…
Me…Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
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I would enjoy it more if there was more emotion/passion, also maybe without the whole rhyming thing!.!.!. just a suggestion, it might just be because i'm in a stage where i fancy those kind of poems at the moment!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It is hard to write a poem about something you have no idea of!. I would suggest of writing about the things you have experienced / felt , it will sound less "fake"!. Keep writing and good luck :)
Edit : I apologise for my ignorance!. then!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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It's lacking something, I feel your on the verge of it but just shy of the mark, very nice!.!.!.I feel like you have to really reach!.!.!.!.back to your exp[eriences!.!.!.and then see what you get!. I think you'll be plaesantly surprised!.!.!. good luck!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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9/10 pure emotion good stuff !!Www@QuestionHome@Com
aww very sweet !.i really have to give u 10/10 !. u really r brave!. bravo ! May god bless u !Www@QuestionHome@Com