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Question: So!.!.!.have we all been given this gift!?
The Gift

Wisdom, left the house,
never knocked
again!.
Didn't whisper
a word!.

The beautiful
dark eyed angel,
beloved,
despised,
never caring which,
left a gift
on my doorstep!.

Sometimes,
it was a necklace,
diamonds made
out of tears,
other times
a journal,
where I scribed memories
in pink ink!.

One time
it was a razor,
frightening and
crystalline,
and I laid it
aside,
waiting for the
shift!.

It has been a hammer,
a diaper,
a band-aid,
a credit card,
a car key,
a condom,
a Bible,
a pentagram,
a whisper,
a hug,
a kiss,
a child!.!.!.

but it's true form
has never changed!.
When Wisdom went,
she left a box,
wrapped in newspaper!.

Headline:
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This poem has just been added to my list of all time favorites!. I have been given this gift!. I never really looked at experience as a gift, but it really is when you think about it!.
Wonderful insight!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Are you speaking of the timeless wisdom seen in an infant's eyes giving the gift of experience when the baby begins to grow up!? That is a wondrous theme, if so!. I have always though infants were the wisest of souls!. The gift of experience as a newspaper wrapped box is a wonderful image!. Timeless and eloquent, as usual!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My rabbi said, "Wisdom is the combination of intelligence with experience!."
The Pennsylvania Dutch have a saying, "We get old too fast, and smart to old!."

I say - combining intelligence, experience, a youthful approach, and a pronouced tendency towards verbosity, "You are one hell of a good poet!." You can quote me on that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is amazin' my friend,


I truly am speechless this time *^_^*


Experience, this couldn't be any more perfect <3Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is interesting how we gather our "wisdom" - from objects laying in our path!. You have given the attribute a personality - well done!Www@QuestionHome@Com

A very beautiful message you send!
Thank you!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Simpy beautimussWww@QuestionHome@Com

Excellent and very creative!.!!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I found another favorite!. Yes, we have been given the gift!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A lot of "A's" there!. I will give you one too!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is pure platinum!Www@QuestionHome@Com