Poem...rate 1-10?

Question: Poem!.!.!.rate 1-10!?

Trembling hands fumble for the lock,
unsteady legs crumble to the floor,
shaking fingers search out steel,
I lean against the door!.

My mind races,
my heart races,
I hear their words,
and see their faces!.

Silver carves,
a shallow line,
crimson seeps to the surface

Porcelain contrasts against the blood,
a backdrop akin to my mind:
numb, shocked, absent, coldWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

9/10, I like Emo poems:
For those who don't get it;
She locks herself in a room and leanes against a door!.
She remembers the things/ people that meake her sad or angry!.
Then she cuts her wrist, then the emotional pain goes away!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

assuming ten is the best
8 1/2Www@QuestionHome@Com

10

loving it keep it up =]Www@QuestionHome@Com

8: the last stanza doesn't rhyme!. But still good :]Www@QuestionHome@Com

reminds me of the movie carrie!.!.!.other than that!?
I say find FUN happy things to do!. PRAYING helps too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it! I give it a 10!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i would give it a 9!.
i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com

That is so good!. Perfect combination of writing and free verse!.

10!.

:)Www@QuestionHome@Com