Ok, I really suck when it comes to poetry, but....?

Question: Ok, I really suck when it comes to poetry, but!.!.!.!.!?

Tell me what you think!.

My heart is broken
But my tears are gone!.
I've cried enough
Let what's done be done!.

I'm all alone,
Though he's by my side!.
I don't matter
Only his pride!.

I should leave,
But love him so!.
What else can I do
But let him go!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Pretty good! Id change the first verse a bit to:

My heart is broken
though my tears are gone!.
I've cried enough
what's done is done!.

Just because it keeps the lines a bit shorter, and each one pretty much has the same sylable length!.

Hope i seem nice!! :-PWww@QuestionHome@Com

My heart is broken
But my tears are gone!.
I've cried enough
let bygones be bygones
and be done!?

I'm all alone,
lost and lonely
feeling so forlorn
Though he's by my side!.
I seem to not matter at all
feeling hopeless
like a little pawn

i loved him
But let him go!?
my tears are hurting
to see him go
can you mend a broken heart
if its dragged undertow !?Www@QuestionHome@Com

My Heart is broken, and my tears are gone
Iv'e cried enough
Let what's done be gone!.

Alone am I
He by my side
I matter not, only his pride!.

Now I leave him now
but love him so
What else can I do, but love him so!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com