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Question: Is this poem good enough for an a in a 7th grade english class!?
Sometimes it rains
Other it pours
Sometimes the pain
Closes all doors
One day without you
Just goes to waste
I know now it's true
That you cant be replaced
My dreams are of days
When we were together
I can't stop and gaze
Without rain in the weather
I wish you could see
My mind is a haze
If we only could be
We'd have sunshiny days
Please tell what you think im only 12 i wrote this for a grade but it kinda fits some people i know so please rate and tell me what grade you think i would get
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I'd give you an A - (I hope this some-one isn't a girl friend, you are too young, Granny Jill said sternly!)
You have some lovely lines here, and the poem flows really well - I especially like your 'I can't stop and gaze, Without rain in the weather'
well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Im am 12 too and in 7th grade and this poem is amazing and meaningful, i would change 2 small things: other it pores to other times it pores and sunshiny days to sunshine daysWww@QuestionHome@Com
a+
thats an awesome poem and to think you're only 12!Www@QuestionHome@Com
A plus!
this poem rocks!Www@QuestionHome@Com
that was really good!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Boy you is Trill wit this i give you a A+ wow you are amazingWww@QuestionHome@Com
dude ur only 12!!? omg this pome is one of the best ive ever read, and thats good!!!
if i was ur teacher ill give u an A :) :) :) :) :) :) :)Www@QuestionHome@Com