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Question: Random poem i wrote!? (sad kinda!.!.!.about growing up)!?
If you can't love
then you can't feel
the emotions inside
that feel so real

And once you discover
that sunsets arent so real
That the sunrise is just the same
The time they only seal

And once you discover
that the wind does not sing
That all it is
is a mornful ring

And ears dont hear
and eyes can't see
what the world is made of
What it really could be

And once you discover
that fariy tales aren't real
that the magic is nothing
It was just an appeal

Once you discover
that he doesn't exist
That he was an illusion
from the lovely mist

And the stars aren't shaped
with pointed sides
All they do is shine
and in the end they die

And the lightning that strikes
isn't from a famous greek god
That its all earth science
It was just a fraud

And the hands on the clock
are just there to say
that the time is gone
It's twilight now, not day

*ya i wrote it in about ten minutes so if it sucks, feel free to say it =)Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow i thought that was really good, i wish poems can come to me like that!.!.i still write poems like im in 2nd grade when im in 9th!. i like it a lot continue writing!. well doneWww@QuestionHome@Com

No it does not suck at all!.
It is a very good poem!.
I love the subject!.
I really like it!.
Very nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow =] I liked the poem,lol!.
I enjoy writing poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

cool! true!. and if anyone wants to know i did NOT tp any ones house!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like itttWww@QuestionHome@Com