A poem for Sat nite in the city of the Dead.?

Question: A poem for Sat nite in the city of the Dead!.!?

"welded'

The gate to my hearts been welded shut!.
Our love finally locked long away!.
Like those who gasp for one last breath,
I cannot hide from you as nothing is left!.

If all of my sorrow suddenly left me
I'd cry me an ocean of tears!.
All that I want is one final chance,
feel my love come shining through!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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I like it!. It was really good!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am terrible at poetry so take my answer for what it is worth, but i like it!. i like a lot of poetry, i just am not good at writing it!. This is really good and i wouldn't change it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

if you have one final chance then take it!.please forgive the girl who screwed that all up!. She's an idiot who is broken without you!. and she wants one more chance too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Could be better!.

Needs more flow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

well said!.!.!.!.!.no words can express how perfect you use words to express all kind of emotions!.!.carry on steve!.Www@QuestionHome@Com