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Beauty, Distinction, Excelence, Perfection
All they deserve is a little attention

Second one is okay as written

Yellow
Makes me think of power
Like the roar of a lion
Hunting its prey

I am
Knowledge, Hope, Love!.
I like dancing and singing!.
Trust, Honesty and Opinion are important to me
Helping others makes me feel good!.
Lying is wrong (but it can save you from big trouble)
The world is getting smaller
Days and nights fly by
Why we can't get along
I am

I scream, shout and cry
Fury, anger, confusion!.!.!.
Am I about to blow up!?

August heat darts in like a swarm of bees
Buzzing around looking for Fall
It lands lightly, spreading hot wings
Then flies out of sight

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I'll tackle one of the above:(I am)

I am
Knowledge, Hope, Love!.
I like dancing and singing!.
Trust, Honesty, and Opinion are important to me!.
Helping others makes me feel good!.
Lying is the wrong thing to do but it can save you from getting into big trouble!.
The world seems to get smaller!.
Days & nights seem to fly by!.
I don’t understand why we can't get along!.
I am!.

<<<<< Possibly change to>>>>>>

I am
Knowledge, Hope, Love!.
I am
Dancing and Singing

Lying is the wrong-trouble that will save you!.!.!.
Lying is the wrong-trouble that will save you!.!.!.

I am
Trust, Honesty, Opinion
I am
Important, Important

Lying is the wrong-trouble that will save you!.!.!.
Lying is the wrong-trouble that will save you!.!.!.

The world
smaller, smaller
Days, Nights
faster, faster

Lying is the wrong-trouble that will save you!.!.!.
Lying is the wrong-trouble that will save you!.!.!.

Knowing not
Why fight, fight, fight
Knowing not
Why fight

Lying is the wrong-trouble that will save you!.!.!.
Lying is the wrong-trouble that will save you!.!.!.
I am
I am

I am!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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