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Question: Rate my poem "I'm dieing a slow painful death!."!?
I'm dieing a slow painful death!.

My heart cries when I want to be with you!.

The pain and depression cut deep!.

Without you I can't even sleep!.

And when I do I drown in pain!.

Is so hard for me to contain!.

The feelings for you which sill remain!.

For only love can mend my broken heart!.

And without you I fall apart!.

I live in a shadow if the former me!.

Sobbing and wishing of what could be!.

For this pain is like no other I've ever known!.

A spiral of pain!.

A deadly cyclone!.

A big black pit of pain and despair!.

The walls grow taller as the pit deepens!.

But I am unaware!.

For my heart is broken and in need of repair!.

Only you can mend my heart!.

For I am dieing a slow painful death!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I heard of dying from a broken heart
but this poem says it well
It describes the pain from heartache
due to the crying
Being apart
is pain enough to endure
A heart is broken and its in need of repair
I would think of either a break up
they cause heartaches
also missing someoneWww@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful it brought a tear to my eye i rate it 100 lol ^_^Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I LOVE IT!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

WOW! that's so good! 10!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com