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Question: How is my poem thing!?Who knows what it means!?
I meet your Eye, Evil
I once thought Fogiveness was Right
But with Ignorence, you Scar
I don't differ between Dumb or Evil
I don't care if your Sorry
I meet your Eye, Fool

I am brave, to meet your eye
I am right to point your flaws
Your mar is on par with evil
With change brought from you
I will look, for forgivness,OR Revenge for you
I knowing you are the closet to evil, I meet your EyeWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think it's ok!.
Sounds a lot like a rant more than a poem!.
Nice:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes it is a thing!. Spell check and keep practising!. The words you need to spell correctly are "Ignorance", "marr" and "forgiveness"!. Otherwise I see it is set out as a poem so that is some thing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The capital letters are very distracting, even if they are for a reason!. Other than that, your "poem thing" is not very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sorry I don't like the poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i dun get itWww@QuestionHome@Com