Sharing my poem?

Question: Sharing my poem!?

Please comment on this poem I've made:
http://ex8!.deviantart!.com/art/My-Love-Fa!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like it!. I can see someone reciting this to their future wife!. It's poignant and intimate but not overly provocative!. Very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its cool!. Very romantic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its beautiful!.!.!.!.
it is more than beautiful!.!.!.BRAVO :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

lol cool i like it! sweet, and tender!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com