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Question: What do you give this poem!? 1-10!?
You can only get hurt so much
before you are broken beyond repair
So i guess i'll walk away
and feel broken that your not there

You can only walk away so much
and leave all dazed and frail
and smile and say "I'm ok"
Heart on broken scale

You can only admit to yourself
that he will never love me
Walk away before the full damage is done
I feel lifeless and unfreed

Because you never loved me
and you never gave me a chance
i never know when to let go
without a backwards glance

Because you never cared about me
the way i STILL care about you
The tears and the pain arent enough
to tell you "i care about you"

So i guess i wont smile for a while
You'll know its about you
You'll try to cover it up and smile
It wont lift me form my stage of blue

You can only get hurt so much
and you say it to yourself
"i dont need him!. its ok
im better off with someone else!."

and yes i am a teenager so ya!.!.!.!.just to let u know and all!.!.!.=) thxxWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
a 1 with lots of 0's in the back! something like 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 / 10!.
and i think we all have been there before and well all felt and/or fell that way!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

1000000000000000000000000000000000000000!.!.!. /10Www@QuestionHome@Com

10Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice job , good poem 10Www@QuestionHome@Com

Amazing!!! 1000/10!. I loved it I could see how the girl felt:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

10!!! u tottally rock! 10 fingers up including toes lol!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it is one of the best ones that i have read on yahoo answers so far!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its good!. you have talent i give you an 11/10Www@QuestionHome@Com