Visual poem...what do you think?

Question: Visual poem!.!.!.what do you think!?

youme
…stay so close to me,

ymoeu
…that I can’t tell what is yours and what is mine!.

m you e
…as you look into my eyes,

!.!.!.!.!.!.!.me
meyoume
!.!.!.!.!.!.me
…penetrate my only secret!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

very perceptive and creative!. pity about the fonts!. the yahoo format does not do it justice!. I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"ymoeu"
I love this!.!.!.very imaginative!

Can a borrow your imagination for a while!?

Pointers>>>>>me
!.!.!.!.!.you scare me!.

me DC networks
!.!.!.!.!.I can never understand you!.

me me me!.!.!.Mechanics!.!.!.me me me
I study you all the time!.

meCommunication Skills
!.!.!.my last exam, when will you come to me!.

inducmorollingtiontypevoiddeffluids
(induction motor rolling motion typedef void fluids)
!.!.!.!.!.Oh my God! nothing is clear!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

its vivid!.!.!.i like it!. two people are one kinda thing!. its good!. it could be lengthened quite a bit!. there a lot more visual words and descriptions you can use to improve!. i think its good but very basic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

As I have said before, your writing is very good!. Please don't stop!.Www@QuestionHome@Com