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Question: Reality is the title!.!?
there is not a moment that goes by that
I don't think about you
you stay fresh in my mind like the
wine gushing down my throat
sometimes I wonder about you like the
wondering enfent without there parents
the tears flow as I go on
Its just so hard without you here
why did you leave this place
without you all reality is broken in everyone
travel back in time to find you
but lost in time
I found myself confused
with the door closing fast
~Erika T!.
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This is so full of heartfelt feeling that it is very moving!. The end is really good, very thought provoking!. I wonder if the door is closing to the past or back to the present!. Either way, it works!. If you don't mind a slight correction, I believe the 6th line is meant to be
"wandering infant without their parents"!.
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I think it could be a quite good poem!.
Maybe use some creative words!.
Read it aloud and fix the parts that don't seem to flow right!.
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Sorry, but it is too of an average love poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com