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Question: Please tell me what you think!? Past remains!.!?
Time will not stop but move faster
so thoughts repeat from past
never turning back
thought rise up
wonder comes but strikes fast
there never leaving
always staying
I can't help it
they remain in site like
a dark hallway with a light at the end
the faster you run the farther it gets
never fading
all is lost but the past

~Erika T!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think it's quite good!.
It could use punctuation!.
I'd give it around a 6 or so!.
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