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by Dag Drahmr A big orange orb, peeks from behind the hills!. Sol yawns and stretches, climbing from its bed!. Now on high, harsh to the eyes, sits hot and white!. Everything grows, Sol says green!. A large orange orb, sinks slowly behind the hills!. Darkening blue crawls higher, as Sol drags itself into bed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Very enjoyable not only from the literal but philosophical!. Liked the lines: sol yawns and stretches and darkening blue crawls higher!. My complimentsWww@QuestionHome@Com Well - I must say your verse is very colourful, evocative and fluid!. However, you put alot of emphasis on the "orange orb" and I'm sure your readership would like to know more about who Sol is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Lovely poem Coop!. I like following Sol's whereabouts!. Very colorful and full of good imagery!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |