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Question: A Poem - The Mishap - Do You Like!?
Driving to the doctor one day
In the merry merry month of May
I was taken by surprise
By a bumpity bump bump outside
I dared to look at the bod
Bargaining with God
Please if it's okay
I'll be good everyday
Alas, the plate was afar
Detached from the car
Misshapen and sad
It was very very bad!
Quickly I sped
To my friendly mechanic and pled
Fix it kind sir and do not show
The dents - my husband must never know
He threw back his head and laughed
I swear I'll never tell on your behalf
So far it's working my way
In the merry merry month of MayWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
(Smiles!.!.!.yes I like)
That metal on metal sound is always one of the worst sounds we can hear, isn't it!.!.!.
Which makes May not so merry!.!.!.hee hee!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Haha, that's great! It really is!.!.!. merry! It's cheerful and nice!. But I think the lines "Misshapen and sad/ It was very very bad!" should be changed!. That's a kindergarten rhyme!. But I really like it, and now I'll go on my way this morning feeling a lot more cheerful!. Thanks!Www@QuestionHome@Com
It has happened to practically everyone!. I'm glad you're still merry and singing a song!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I am glad you are merry! And the question is: have you been good everyday!? lol
A merry poem with a nice ending!. May is a nice month! Good one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is very good and and i loved the story in the poem' as it all came together real nicely!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
That is really nice! I think it is a lot better than a lot of other poems I have read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
honestly it's a little kiddishWww@QuestionHome@Com