I want to know if my poem is any good. I asked my friends but of course they are

Question: I want to know if my poem is any good!. I asked my friends but of course they are going to say it's good!.!?

Love That Grows

I think I may like him
But my friends all say no!.
I think I may love him
But they turn up their nose!.
I think he loves me
But they won't let him near!.
Because their afraid of the love growing here!.
Here in my heart is where the love grows!.
Here in my heart is where it shows!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Love that grows ( my feedback )
This is a wonderful poem!.
at least I like it
It talks about friendship then later love
From what I am reading you found someone
he found you!.
Tell your friends that everyone needs love
including you including them!.
They shouldn't feel threatened!.
But perhaps they might feel you will get hurt!.
I can see from the heart love will grown
and it will also show!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's alright!. You mispelled something!.!.!.
Because their afraid of the love growing here!. Where it says their, it should say they're!. I think u mean they r!.
but over all it's a good start for a love poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The poem is okay, however there is aproblem with the use of the word THEIR in the seventh line!. You should be using the contraction for THEY ARE -------THEY'RE!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its not bad!.
The part where it stops flowing is :
"But they won't let him near!.
Because their afraid of the love growing here"Www@QuestionHome@Com

High School year book, which you read 20 years later!. Don't do it!! Crushes rarely make good poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I LIKE IT IT'S GOOD!!Www@QuestionHome@Com