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Question: Save me,my love!.!.!.Do you like this!?
Are you scared,my love,but this is where I live
Above is my sinful nightmare and below,my awakedness
That twinkling dot is not a star,its my flaming, diminishing soul
Do you see the full moon haunted by dark clouds!?
It has ever seemed so near,while it never was
I have been pining for it,for I've forever seen you there
Rainstorms and hurricane have weathered this old bridge
Forgive me, my darling if it terrorises your tender heart
But I promise you seasons of springs,
Little pigeons in place of those bats,
I promise you sunlit blue skies and happy rainbows,
And when nights start to fall
I'd enchant your skies with fireworks
This bridge may be in ruins today,
But give me your strength,
I'd build you an island,an empire here
Stay here with me,my sweet love
Save me,make me breathe again!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I'm so grateful to Ginsberg and Kerouac for canceling out that!.
'Little pigeons in place of those bats' That's seriously shocking!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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6-may-2008
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It's very interesting!. I think doves are better then pigeons!. Not bad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Its like a angels kiss!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Good poem!.!.move on!.!.!.your thoughts are just too much shocking!! But well!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com