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Question: 2nd to last for the nite!. is this any good!.!?
"river of tears"


Secretly advancing, through lifes web of lies,
Some of yours inside of me, Some of mine in you!.
The pain inside me vacuum packed, bottled with no cracks,
Long, lost and forgotten, on back of some dusty shelf,!.
Comfortably remove from me, this horrid awful hurt,!.
I've found that I can't take this can't do this anymore!.
Lost all my agility, sometimes pain is all I taste!.
I wish I would just drfit away, on a river of salty tears!.
Lifes not wrth this sad torment, tortured every day!.
All it's been is loss and grief, misery my dear!.
I'm not even here mon frer, just the pain du jour!.
The tears I shed for you my love,
I shed them everyday!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Blaise Pascal: (1623 - 1662)

The heart has its reasons which reason knows nothing of!.

We know truth, not only by reason, but also by the heart!.

Man is but a reed, the most feeble thing in nature, but he is a thinking reed!. The entire universe need not arm itself to crush him!. A vapour, a drop of water, suffices to kill him!. But if the universe were to crush him, man would still be more noble than that which killed him, because he knows that he dies and the advantage which the universe has over him; the universe knows nothing of this!. Quoted by Rebecca West in "Black Lamb and Grey Falcon: A Journey Through Yuguslavia, 1940!.

What else does this craving, and this helplessness, proclaim but that there was once in man a true happiness, of which all that now remains is the empty print and trace!? This he tries in vain to fill with everything around him, seeking in things that are not there the help he cannot find in those that are, though none can help, since this infinite abyss can be filled only with an infinite and immutable object; in other words by God himself!.

There is a God-shaped vacuum in the heart of every person, and it can never be filled by any created thing!. It can only be filled by God, made known through Jesus Christ!.

I have discovered that all human evil comes from this, man's being unable to sit still in a room!.

We are generally the better persuaded by the reasons we discover ourselves than by those given to us by others!.

I have made this [letter] longer, because I have not had the time to make it shorter!. "Lettres provinciales", letter 16, 1657Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a beautiful poem but maybe you should try not to use every day 2 times!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com