Plating With A Word: Care to Comment?

Question: Plating With A Word: Care to Comment!?

I'm patient
This is what I say
She always puts things together
Impatient

As time goes by I can not wait
Terrible fate
This is how I
Both live and die

My toe does tap upon the floor
I'll wait no more
Make it happen
Won't ask again

I have not learned to take my time
I can not find
The will to sit
That is a (insert expletive)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Class! I love word play!. (I also love the typo in the title, it really works with the subject matter!!)
The last line begs a reference to your pen name!.!.!.
"I have not learned to take my time
I can not find
The will to sit
That is a curse, of royal biscuit"

Tanx for that one!.!.!.
D

ps!. Will post a recently penned wordplay shortly!. Would love yer opinion(s)!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The Board of Directors of the Poetry Section, Subdivision of Bodily Effluvia and Organs, has directed me to inform you that the insertion of certain expletives into any of a variety of human organs or poems may have a deleterious effect!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You know what!? You sound like a guy who likes a woman to slave away for all your needs and obsessions, get a live please!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Bit*hWww@QuestionHome@Com

I'm too impatient to play with words (or with anything) just now!. I need more coffee!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Are we patient or impatient!? I will ponder!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Poem seemed a little rushed (ha ha)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't like this angry side of you King!.!.!.!.!.makes me worry about you Bro!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

not goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

Ah, I suffer from that same discordant plight!
Well stated!Www@QuestionHome@Com

B*tch!?!?!? lol
I liked it!.!.!. Hell i am in love with all of your workWww@QuestionHome@Com