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Question: Poem: from him to her, then nevermore!?
what''s gone wrong!?
i can''t think straight
it''s been so long
since i''ve seen your face
i want to touch
want to try
but will i burn!?
will i die!?
question is
am i set!?
to take a chance
that may end in regret!?
i used to be curious
now i can''t get enough


stare at me with yearning eyes
melt your skin with mine
you ignite the flame
that drives me insane
you set my soul on fire
i can feel
you when the night creeps up between my thighs
when another part of my sanity dies
the gentle caress, of a demon in distress
hate to feel
the after burn of a such a restless night
the sun singeing my nocturnal eyes
the whip crack in justice of my heart''s denial

it feels so strange
to be the centre of my own shame
i embrace my pain
let it carry off my blame
i tried to relent
tried to fight
but my flesh gave in
and so i lied
i let it go
yet the memory carries on
haunting my dreams
with this wretched song
i used to be scrupulous
now it seems i''ve lost my touch

all this time i swore i''d only love another man
but as fate increased the days
allowing time to slip away
my heart made a change of plans
i can feel
the anguish when he walks out of my life
her lull me to sleep as i hold her tight
my fate falling out of my sight
hate to feel
the revelation of his disdain
the sour agony of reaping tainted grain
the sorrow that never cameWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
OMG OMG! i lovey your ppooeemm:):)
ill give it a TEN:)
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i thought it was appsolutly exalent just the last paragraph verse thing is kinda not haveing to do with the rest with the girl and grain yea just changed it a bit in my opinonWww@QuestionHome@Com

Liked it! (especially the twist at the end)Www@QuestionHome@Com

its really goodWww@QuestionHome@Com