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Position:Home>Poetry> Who likes my spooky poem?Question: Who likes my spooky poem!? He came apon a dark lite night!.
The moon was high!. a bat in flight!. A vampire stalks her true to form!. Abounds his evil brings on the storm!. A splash of blood!.a yell,a scream To him to hold,no life,no death He lay his princess down to rest!. Behold a evil lust of joy No pain,no tomorrow In death we toil!. Beyond the night and one can see!. This princess of darkness Belongs to me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I think that was not one of your better ones!. I think that was one of your best ones!.!.!!! Awesome!.!.awesome!.!.awesome!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Well, it's interesting!. You need to use spellcheck and it's he lays his princess down to rest!. That sounds better!. Or he laid his princess down to rest even better!. It's a good spooky poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Wicked as u should become a horrro poem writterWww@QuestionHome@Com awesome!!! just fix the typos: apon -> upon a evil -> an evilWww@QuestionHome@Com interesting poem i like it!. write more cos it looks like you have poem writting talent there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com nice niceWww@QuestionHome@Com creepy and awsomeWww@QuestionHome@Com i like ittWww@QuestionHome@Com ooo i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com |