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Question: How is this poem, Final Curtain Call!?
My Final Yahoo Curtain!.
The time has come for me to go,
This childish chit must stop!.
I will not waste the time I have,
To wade through all this slop!.
I'll go along my merry way,
And find somewhere to post!.
Of all the ones I'll miss on here,
I'll miss my friends the most!.
I cannot stand to see the strife,
This turmoil is too much!.
I must get out and leave this here,
The nastiness and such!.
Should I sound like a fed-up wench,
You can say that I am!.
And for the ones who bicker on,
I just don't give a dam!.
I may return some later time,
And also I may not!.
But for right now I will be gone!.
My outrage is now hot!.
If I offend with words so strong,
Then maybe it should be!.
All of this bullchit has to stop!.
So let it stop with me!
Those of you who have sent phone numbers to me will hear from me as long as you like!. To the others I say goodbye with tears of sadness!. Dondi, I will call!.
I love you all, that's why all this hurts so much!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Beautiful Poetry, darling, but I don't like what you are doing!. I enjoy reading your work and teaching you and being that to you which you never had!. You will be missed!. If this doesn't end soon, I will join you in limbo!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is not adieu, my lovely lady, but simply au revoir!. Not goodbye, but until I see you again!. You are a beautiful and strong person, may all your wounds, emotional and physical be perfectly healed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I will miss you, my friend, but I understand your reasons for leaving!. Perhaps those of us dedicated can end the war, and you will feel all right about returning!. I won't say good-bye, but "see you later!."Www@QuestionHome@Com
Sure, blame me!. You have no idea how much work went into "Oh, what a Tangled Web!." I am tired too,
but!.!.!.
"and miles to go before I sleep!.
and miles to go before I sleep!."Www@QuestionHome@Com
Well, written!.!.!. you might try blogging!. You will have a place to share more indepth converaations and deliver a extended and long term participation!. Good luck!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I can fully agree with where you are coming from with the poem!. I wish you my best whatever happens!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Thank you very much for the kind comments you posted on my work!.
Best wishes to you and goodbye!. :(Www@QuestionHome@Com
I feel you!.
This place has gotten out of control!.
Nice poem by the way, sad because it's true, but nicely written!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Your words sadden me deeply from your pain that you have to leave here!.I have already left a few months ago but do pop in write a poem and answer questions and then go!.I hope i have not offended you are anyone here with my poems yesterday about DP but he knows he was wrong and he;ll have to answer to my dad and God!.!.!.Please i wish you would stay !.I have prayed on this and it's out of my hands but your a special and wonderful young lady and lots of luck and May God always be with you as his angels guide you!.!.!.!.Peachie/camiWww@QuestionHome@Com