IS this a good poem 1-10 what would you give me?

Question: IS this a good poem 1-10 what would you give me!?

In life there is pain,
And tears which you can't control!.
There is darkness,
There is war,
Of which you can't ignore!.

But when i see you,
Everything becomes clearer!.
You are my healer!.

Your eyes bring brightness to my soul,
Your touch makes me fill something other than cold!.
You have dried my tears before away!.
All i wish for,
Is for you to heal me with your kiss this May!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Aww, is your honey coming home this May!? It's nice, you gave me backround information with which I can assume your honey is a soldier!.!.!.right!? While he's away you cry because you miss him and when he's with you, you're too happy for words!. This is really nice, I feel as though I have insight to your situation!.!.!.or at least I hope I interpreted it correctly!. 9/10!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

9/10 only because you should always capitalize the"I"!. Not only because it is proper, it is because you belittle yourself in others eyes when you use the small i if you refer to yourself!. Please remember this if you ever apply for a job in a professional position!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

id say 1o yay

i like it!.!.!.answer my question please!!?! its a poem as well

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10!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

9 if you take the may out then its a 10!Www@QuestionHome@Com

9Www@QuestionHome@Com

I LOVE IT'S RELLY GOOD!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

it sucks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com