He's acting odd
frozen
frenetic
and erratic
I cajole
and
whisper
sweet promises
I'll dust
use canned air
and wipe
your face
Still
he stares
at me
blanklyWww@QuestionHome@Com
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frozen frenetic and erratic I cajole and whisper sweet promises I'll dust use canned air and wipe your face Still he stares at me blanklyWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: The computer screen muse is on hiatus!? Binary meltdown !? Dos overload!? Apple with a worm!? Gray Fuzz!? Blank Screen!? Marguerite's Shadow!? Must go now, my screen is acting weird!Www@QuestionHome@Com Very deep, and succinct, a subtle blade that doesn't cause pain, and you don't realize your bleeding until you faint!.!.!.lovely!. I can think of nothing to head your magnificent poem, but I know there are others more talented who can help!. Blessed Be!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Well "The Stone Angel" is already taken, how about "Statuesque"!?Www@QuestionHome@Com maybe just the simple title of "him" or "frozen love" "frosty love" !? xWww@QuestionHome@Com Robot Love!. I like it but it can only be a robot or a statue, to a statue does not stare but robots do!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Frozen in Time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com The CatWww@QuestionHome@Com Is it the rubber ducky!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Anxiety or Hes dead but I keep him anywayWww@QuestionHome@Com |