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Question: A Poem - What should the title be!?
He's acting odd
frozen
frenetic
and erratic

I cajole
and
whisper
sweet promises

I'll dust
use canned air
and wipe
your face

Still
he stares
at me
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The computer screen muse is on hiatus!? Binary meltdown !? Dos overload!? Apple with a worm!? Gray Fuzz!? Blank Screen!? Marguerite's Shadow!? Must go now, my screen is acting weird!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very deep, and succinct, a subtle blade that doesn't cause pain, and you don't realize your bleeding until you faint!.!.!.lovely!. I can think of nothing to head your magnificent poem, but I know there are others more talented who can help!. Blessed Be!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well "The Stone Angel" is already taken, how about "Statuesque"!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

maybe just the simple title of "him"
or
"frozen love"
"frosty love"

!?

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Robot Love!. I like it but it can only be a robot or a statue, to a statue does not stare but robots do!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Frozen in Time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The CatWww@QuestionHome@Com

Is it the rubber ducky!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Anxiety

or


Hes dead but I keep him anywayWww@QuestionHome@Com