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Question: Somebody help me end my story!?!?!?
? 17 year-old gets pregnant and has the baby
? She doesn’t want the baby
? Scientists take the baby
? Keep baby in empty white room
? They leave him naked
? They don’t teach him anything
? Their experiment is watching him develop on is own
? They only feed him necessary nutrients through pills and water
? They watch him through cameras 24/7
? They sometimes leave an object in the room Ex: Ball, TV, etc!. to see him react
? Sometimes he speaks, but it is only gibberish!.
When he is 15, they set him loose in New York City
I'm lost from here!.!.!.
I kinda want him to die in the end!. F!.Y!.I!.
thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think that you have arrived at the beginning of your story, not the end!. I think that the real story is what happens to the guy once set loose in the world!. You could have him abused by violent homeless people, attacked by punks, picked up by a compassionate man/woman/both and taken in, arrested, chased down by the scientists!.!.!.
You could have him somehow find his parents, the one "good" scientist rebels from the rest and helps him get away- whatever that could be!.
Yeah, you just ended the prelude, man- story is just beginnin'Www@QuestionHome@Com
so hes retarded what about
boy meets a friend
friend takes boy to a reterded society
vistes everyday
so boy likes a retararded girl
have a baby
and the babes normall
the friend comes
and talks to the docter
friend takes the baby
soon boy needs a heart
dont give it to him because he retarded
friend comes
when boy is dying he says "let me be free"
{the boy understood enough to say that and whants to die}Www@QuestionHome@Com
he has to meet a friend in new york to really get that more emotional state like a girl!. so they kind of fall in love but, he feels something is wrong that inside himself he feels he doesnt know what love is and then an astroid flies down to earth eurupting armargedan and the earth goes into panic diseases get out of control him and the girl try to escape the wrath of this forcoming not sure how to survive, they go to hills where most people arent and try to settleWww@QuestionHome@Com
So basically you just have the first 2 pages!. Do you want someone to write the story for you!?Www@QuestionHome@Com