Birth
Of child
Such glory
A new life
Right before my eyes
Now to watch the stages
From infancy to toddler
And that well known phase, puberty
All the way through until adulthood
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Of child Such glory A new life Right before my eyes Now to watch the stages From infancy to toddler And that well known phase, puberty All the way through until adulthood Wait a minute, I have to pay for this!Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: *points!.!.!.to lines 3 and 4!.!.!. and runs* pains of child birth are soon forgotten as they are placed in your arms life TemariWww@QuestionHome@Com Kleppty's right you know, Line 4 'A new life' so how about A brand new life - you can have that for nothing, just as long as my name appears as co-author of this lovely nonet - why are they called that!? This has 10 lines, we are all doing them this way - but should they really only be 9 lines/9 syllables Is this autobiographical - are congratulations in order!?Www@QuestionHome@Com haha great ending is this that nonet thingy!? i might give it a try!.!.!.attempt to chase off my writer's block!. note: if the lines are meant to go 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9 - you're missing a syllable in line 4Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it!.!.!.from tender to comic!.!.!.!.!.I'd kind of like to have one of each! Not sure I preferred the switch-over!.!.!.!.!.but it's good!Www@QuestionHome@Com In more ways then one, Blessings The feeling of love can't be bought, enjoy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com lol!. The end way totally unexpected! Loved it the whole way through!! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, we all went through that stage! (And in some cases, beyond!.) Still laughing!Www@QuestionHome@Com Very beautiful! The last line, very true !.!.!. and humorous!Www@QuestionHome@Com Ain't it the truth! :O)))) joy, joyWww@QuestionHome@Com Very cute and true!. I love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I likeWww@QuestionHome@Com Lol!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. You are truly talented!. I love reading your work!. Very nice:)Www@QuestionHome@Com Haha!.!.!.that last line is greatWww@QuestionHome@Com CTFU!!! only a parent would enjoy this poem!.!.!.and i got 4 to pay 4 so i defenitly feel u!!! lolWww@QuestionHome@Com |