Help on my poem!!!?

Question: Help on my poem!!!!?

with passion,with soul, with heart,
i tell you i love you
but even though were apart,
we both stay true,
but that dreaded day,
when cut my heart up into little inches,
i will never forget those little pinches,
when my skys turned gray,
and the floor beneath me gave way,
i thought you would of cuaght me,
but you didnt,

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I thought you would of caught me,
but you didn't, you never bought me
with your lies!.

Nice rhyming structure!. Very easy to empathise with!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

on the 2nd last line you put i thought u would of caught me!. its not that, its i thought you would've or would have caught meWww@QuestionHome@Com