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Question: I think this is my 2nd poem or so!.!.!.do you like it!?
The ship moved forth on an unknown journey!.
Long dark nights and vast wild seas passed one by one
Sinking me neck deep in fright and chaos
One day you shined on me from up above
Gave me wings of white feathers,a silken gown,
lifted me up you taught me to fly,
took me to heavens,took me to stars

Visions and dreams i grew them many
but where may I lead them when my morrow is dark
You made me a woman yet not good for you!

When may I look forth to be sent back
and be left to live a life on my own!?

What would I plead the godess of light!?
some sunshine to lock in my old rusting trunk!?
Why would I ask for a swarm of fireflies!? Why!?
When all I yearn for is to revel in my love,
to sing hymns to it and to bathe in glory
For a love so deep is a sublime old art
Why do you reckon I'd try to let it die

Eons may pass and I may perish
But you're eternal'cause you're not mortal
And when little droplets of dew fall
upon the little blue roses in your heart,
you would think of my face and moments we shared
For they are the tears i shed long ago,that
the clouds have long held onto as vapours!.
They dont perish!.!.just change formsWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
that is absolutely brilliant!.!.!.bravo bravo!.!.!.!.clap clap clap!.!.wooo_hooo!.!.!.lovely poem here is a starWww@QuestionHome@Com

this is really good next time take your time on them okayWww@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, This is more like it!
I liked this much better than the first one I read!. Very goodWww@QuestionHome@Com