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Question: Ok, I'm writing as i'm posting, can you help me with this poem!?
Movin' On


For just a moment, think!.!.!.

As you laugh
As you sigh
Reach for a gaff
Or start to cry

As you’re driving
As you’re speaking
Souls are lost
Or someone’s bleeding

Ya, you potty
Don’t we all
But, stop and think
Somebody falls

When you b*tch
When you muster
Pick out rings
Discuss the luster

Watch you favorite
TV shows
Send off the kids
Or out to mow

Someone’s shot
Or being raped
Perhaps, one’s mugged,
A knee is scraped

For just a moment, think!.!.!.

That every time that you complain
Someone is buried,
one is scared
And one is suffering from hard pain

As you wash dishes
Chat online
Walk the dog
Punch in on time

Feed the fish
Protest the wars
See NASCAR live
Or help the poor

Go off to work
Arrive home late
Sit down to study
Or have a date

Change a flat tire
Fly to Greece
Blow out the candles
Call your niece

Someone is lost
Somebody’s gone
In all we do
The world moves on!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That was good!.!.!.

We all take everything so for granted, never realizing how profound it is to just "be!.!.!."

As if some kind of magic was lost when we climbed down from the trees!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well you know how to rhyme!.!.!.but what is the poem suppose to mean!.!.!.Is it suppose to mean, the world is changing!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I honestly can't see anything to change,
besides a couple spelling error's!.
I love this one!.
Really makes one think!.
Very nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

What help is it that you need!?
The world moves on!.!.!.yes indeed!
But why oh why passes by so much greed!?Www@QuestionHome@Com