Poem i rewrote?

Question: Poem i rewrote!?

Sometimes it rains
Other it pours
Sometimes the pain
Closes all doors

One day without you
Just goes to waste
I know now it's true
That you cant be replaced

My dreams are of days
When we were together
I can't stop and gaze
Without rain in the weather

I wish you could see
My mind is a haze
If we only could be
We'd have sunshiny daysWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Wow, you hit the nail on the head for my life!. This is really great, it hits so close to home and I'm sure I'm not the only one who feels like this!. I like how you structured it, in your ABAB!.!.!.etc!.!.!.not only that but you've shown me a story, something that happened how you feel about it, and what you look fowards to once the storm passes!. This is really just great, I'm a little biased because it mirrors my own life, but I really just love it!. 10/10!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice, has a very good point that it carries throughout the entire piece!. Thanks for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is amazing!. Just amazing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"I wish you could see
My mind is a haze"

cool
i like this
=)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i luv it!.!.!.gud job
i dont really get the 2nd line doe
but it works altogetherWww@QuestionHome@Com

i realy like it! its all jolly in the ending and some people like that alot!.good job in ryhming it !Www@QuestionHome@Com