Is this okay? it's called 'the orange'?

Question: Is this okay!? it's called 'the orange'!?

the most anticipated time of the day,
the gathering!.
when everything burns in the fire of dusk!.
when silence conquers all,
when the day met the night!.
here i stand before it,
trying to collect the pieces,
hoping to return to the lost paradise!.
everyday i am closer to it,
as it forms itself!.
when the sequences are complete,
the doors will open for me
for a treasure will emerge,
from the layers i adore!.
from memories i will never find!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

sweet, u should take it down caus someone will steal itWww@QuestionHome@Com

Can Be Better, Slightly vague!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love it and you name it what ever you feel like naming it!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it sounds good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's ok I guessWww@QuestionHome@Com

i like ittt!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

what does an orange have to do with this poem!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

dude this sucks donkey dick!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes!.!.!.

its really good tooWww@QuestionHome@Com

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that is so good, reallyWww@QuestionHome@Com

Awww man thats awesome!!! But poems like that hurt my head =/Www@QuestionHome@Com