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Question: Last for the nite!. How is this one!.!?
"m!.t!.e!."
The wind it calls me gently,
day and night for all my sins!.
Telling me about my life,
life that slowly fades away!.
In the midst, demonic rage,
she comes in all my dreams!.
Visions of death feeds life,
die now!.!.!.you'll feel free!.
Falling slowly backwards,
into an earthen sepulcher!.
Deep inside my resting place,
a tiny filthy charnal house!.
I see my fate ahead so clear,
so close the crystals shine!.
Surrounded by the end of life,
the eve of time, forever gone!.
The gods look down indignantly,
the age of the accursed ones!.
Chaos grows, the end comes near,
all hope and strength have strayed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Saved the best for last huh!? It is good, even with the dark, evil indignant gods checking you out!. Keep writing Steve!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I can't help but like the imagery and tone but i really think that the chaos of this time and place are what will create a better understanding of what we must do now!. So don't abandon hope and stay strong for those who do deserve it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow man, hadn't read anything of yours for a while--you still suck, in my opinion!. Figured you'd be a little better by now!. Nope!. Pure poo!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Brilliant for my taste DP, a succulent write indeed
f*ck the non believers, just believe in me!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
I've missed ur work <3Www@QuestionHome@Com
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