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Position:Home>Poetry> I am alive . LOL A poem about a fish.?Question: I am alive !. LOL A poem about a fish!.!? 'the abyss"
I'd never noticed, the rain, the abyss!. I slice my wrist, you get the jist!. One thing I noticed, trout,bass and perch!. Falling up from the sky, Lookin up and then down!. Black pregnant clouds, Heavy with hail and rain!. Inside my black heart, tornados filled the sky!. Down on my knees, broke right down and cried!. I screamed like a lunatic, Fish really can fly!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: A unique concept for a poem!. A comment about your additional comments!. If in fact Mr!. White is a friend, then I gather you would know his first name and that would be Dana not Dan!. So you just picked up the phone and asked Dana White if you could use the Vegas ring and he said what!?!?!? "Oh sure my good friend I will cancel all the up coming events so you can fight" or sorry as you said "rip someone’s arm out of it socket"! I am sure a man like him does not have the time or the mentality level to get involved in such childish behavior!. You know what I joined YA after I seen some of your (and other's) writing because I actually enjoyed reading what you were writing and thought you had a great quality but you have truly turned into a real immature little boy! This feud that I see everyday when I come out here to enjoy the writings of so many exceptional poets is being ruined by you and the people you are dissing are great writers in case you don't know!. Why don't you just practice what you preach!.!.!.!. meaning - you keep saying that your tired of all the Trolls and everything else out here (YA) and that your done with this site!.!.!.!. Then leave and go post elsewhere or smarten up and get back to what you seem to be good at and that is writing!.!.!. Your wasting your talent on something stupid!.!.!.and your ruining it for everyone else including "me"!.!.!.!. Grow up and act your age, as you seem to post it every other day!.!.!. If in fact you are as old as you say you are then even you should expect more from yourself and have more "Respect" for yourself and all the other people out here trying to enjoy this site!. The hurt little boy inside of you needs some therapy or mediation to fix whatever is wrong with you!. I hope you take the time to figure this out so that all of us can continue to enjoy the writings of all the wonderful poets/writers and Q & A er's out here!. Feel free to bash me like you have everyone else who tells you how he or she truly feels about your antics or voices a personal opinion about you or your writing… I can take it!.!.!.!. Or can you actually take some constructive criticism without having a temper tantrum!.!.!. Let's just wait and see what your response will be!.!.!.!. If any!Www@QuestionHome@Com Don't block me, Dude!. He emailed me to post this for him!. "OK, lets do it!. TD Euwaite!. You know my real name!. I am in the phone book!. You bring your imaginary friends I will bring real ones!." I will do this once!. Really, if you want to argue, you should unblock him!. DaveWww@QuestionHome@Com HOLY SH*T DP I THINK YOU HAVE OUT DONE YOURSELF THIS TIME MY FRIEND!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (I'm proud to say, you are still my friend!.!.!.<3) I am dead yet still remain!.!.!.!.!.humble!.!.!.@)~>~>Www@QuestionHome@Com This is a waste of time, your prosaic rant and your attack on this other guy!. You need to take a SHUT UP pill!. I read your other stuff!. You should stop posting!. You are only showing your azz!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It's an unusual poem!. I like it!. Thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Very nice!Www@QuestionHome@Com dont sinkWww@QuestionHome@Com |