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Question: A Poem for Judith!.!.!.how can I improve it!?
Judith, dear Judith, gentle and kind!.
I am here to ease your sensitive mind!.
No neighborly bystander will ever be blamed
for the innocence this darkness has already claimed!.

This Ya'poetry feud is not about you!.
so feel free to like whomever you choose!.
Just know you are welcome in our circle of friends!.
In no way did we mean for our words to offend!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That was very beautiful and unexpected!. I did not think I was hurting anybody by answering DP`s questions!. I really don`t
know the Poets Of Mars, and did not know anything about
what was going on!. So I want to thank you for clearing this up for me and everyone else!. See you around someday!. You are an EXTRAORDINARY PERSON!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a shame that innocent bystanders are being caught in the middle of this Dark Perversion of poetry!. People come on to this site to learn about poetry, to post their own work and to read the work of others!. I don't understand why Y!A allows such violence to continue to exist, while deleting answers or questions for chatting!. Where is their sense of priorities!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

These are lovely verses and kind gesture!. We mustn't let what has happened interfere with our love of poetry, and the companionship that AY Poetry brings to us all!.

In time all will pass!.

Shinola - you caught us all at a bad time - but, in truth I know very little of what is going on myself despite being here a while!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is kind of you!. I was never offended by Judith and understood she did not know what was going on!. I just blocked her because she still has you know who as her contact!. But it is nothing against her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The words are perfect and unfortunately true!.
Improve it you ask!? Send it with a hug!
I think we could all use one today!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is good, but I'm still unclear about all that has happened!. Can some provide me with the juicy details!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well said!.
It is so sweet!.
Very nice:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is all very strange!. Is this normal, or did I show up during the Twilight Zone!?Www@QuestionHome@Com