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Question: Dp or Tp!.!.!.perhaps a pondering!?
A repost!. Metaphors anyone!?

Metaphorically Speaking

(The names been changed
To protect the innocence
All inferences given…
Strictly fictional of course)

Hail oh mighty one of stature tall
what say ye this dark dreary night!?
Surely words pure with thought
will echo as if yours and yours alone

Visions of razors, death and mayhem
blood, vampires, gore and goth
cold ice the blood of author’s pen
spewing fire with terrifying delight

The spells mesmerized and tantalize
teasing souls to wane praise and song
for prince's charm with deadly wit
as jesters scribe tomorrows scripts

But these sounds carry and carry far
and people ponder long and strong!.
If words claimed are words penned true
Then why so vile the responses spoke!?

But who are we to carry on…
Maybe we’ll just pen a rhyme…
Something to go with lets see- TP
Nah, at least with TP you have a use!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I can't, for the life of me, in the deepest recesses of my facetious imagination or knowledge, figure who this Prince of which you speak could be!. A figure in Darkness, witless and without honour, to which kingdom could he be Prince!?!.!.!. ah yes, to the same kingdom to which the TP you mention is used to clean!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is not of you I speak - the curses and threats to which I refer are those of another, see amendments
Bafflement

I am on the edge of this darkness!.
I have but brief knowledge
of what took place!.
Cryptic references and 'snippets'
led me to bafflement,
as someone fell from grace!.
I KNOW that duplicity has
taken place,
this alone is reason for concern,
But for him to bring here
curses and threats
instead of sweet words
Is an affront to our tranquil world!.

But, I have brief knowledge
of what took place
I am a mere bystander
in this dramatic game!.
So I stand wearing a sorry face
Saying
'For shame!.
For shame!.'Www@QuestionHome@Com

Apt and justly penned poem, Neon!.

Wait a minute, people!.!.!.!.TD will most certainly be back here!
I know it, you know it, the DP knows it!.
Right now, TD is working on putting together what just might be a Pulitzer Prize winning book of poetry, by Dr!. Swetman!.

That, and having his poems deleted, has simply brought on a 'time-out'!.!.!.!.that's all!!!! I know this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A poem filled with true imagery and apt metaphors!. But now, it is time to move on, perhaps to poetry about love, dreams, hopes, travel to the stars, or nature's beauty!. I look forward to reading your work on other subjects!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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What a wonderful metaphor you have penned my friend! Very aptly chosen!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Metaphors and pinafores!.!.!.
We carry on, because we MUST!
(Now I've got to go and dust!.)

Vitriolic for certain!
Isn't it a shame!
Let us not forget!.!.!.
Each of us can complain!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Write on!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I liked this poem a lot and it you did a wonderful job with your words and the subject!.Www@QuestionHome@Com