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"My Life Song"

Feeling the rhythm of life I sway
Rhythmically to the tempo
Experiencing the rush…
I hold fast to the tune
The melody sweet
A pulse in time…
Warm embrace
My life
Song


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Life
This tune
I compose
The notes I use
Are emotional
A symphony of love
Orchestrated by feelings
Conducted with intelligence
And with the world as my audience
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