A bird inquired why I write-
"For wealth!? Fame!? A simple thing
to pass the hours by!?"
I asked in turn, "Why would you fly!?
For joy!? For need!? Or could it be
desire to be free!?"Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Position:Home>Poetry> A new poem- what are your thoughts on it?Question: A new poem- what are your thoughts on it!? A bird inquired why I write-
"For wealth!? Fame!? A simple thing to pass the hours by!?" I asked in turn, "Why would you fly!? For joy!? For need!? Or could it be desire to be free!?"Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: awesome! :-) love it! small but with meaning!Www@QuestionHome@Com a cool way of expressing confusion Write moreWww@QuestionHome@Com i like it, very simple, well done!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com very nice really has feelingWww@QuestionHome@Com yeah it is very expressive !! keep going !.Www@QuestionHome@Com very niceWww@QuestionHome@Com |