Do you like these two poems? How do they sound? please answer?

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Question:

When ure hero falls

when your hero falls from grace
all fairy tales r uncovered
myths exposed and pain magnified
the greatest pain discovered
u taught me 2 be strong
but im confused 2 c u so weak
u said never 2 give up
and it hurts 2 c u welcome defeat
when ure hero falls so do the stars
and so does the perception of tomorrow
without my hero there is only
me alone 2 deal with my sorrow
your heart ceases 2 work
and your soul is not happy at all
what r u expected 2 do
when ure only hero falls

And 2morrow

Today is filled with anger
fueled with hidden hate
scared of being outcast
afraid of common fate
Today is built on tragedies
which no one wants 2 face
nightmares 2 humanities
and morally disgraced
Tonight is filled with rage
violence in the air
children bred with ruthlessness
because no one at home cares
Tonight I lay my head down
but the pressure never stops
knawing at my sanity
content when I am dropped
But 2morrow I c change
a chance 2 build a new
Built on spirit intent of Heart
and ideals
based on truth
and tomorrow I wake with second wind
and strong because of pride
2 know I fought with all my heart 2 keep my
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Since there is an suthor for the first poem i am going to comment on the second one, with no author and guess the meaning!. And can be a lot of things although the message is about suffering or struggling of a human being, whether it is mental or physical!. But not giving up even though there day right now is not going very well, but still have hope tommorrow is a better day, and also thinking that no one cares while they are having such a difficult time makes them angry etc!.!.!.and i say that why put off tommorrow what you can accomplish today!. today is not over and it can turn around if we try and change our thoughts to positive ones!. Not think things that are not at yet a reality and hope for the best!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The first one is by Tupac and of course it is great!!!! The second - i do not know, it may again be by him by I haven't listened to it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

OMG!.!.!.Those are really, really good!.!.!.great word usage, good form, i'd submit them to a poem site!.!.!.!.those are terrific poems!Www@QuestionHome@Com