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Position:Home>Poetry> One More: Care to Comment?Question: One More: Care to Comment!? A commitment, pact
A promise in fact To perform an act Your word It is accepted also expected Is not neglected I wait Time comes, time goes And still nothing shows Forgot I suppose Let down I hear your cries You apologize And give me your "why's" ExcusesWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: It is, your style we enjoy,for awhile it makes me smile Seuss It feels like a dance the words simply prance I have a firm stance proud there soon comes a time we run out of rhyme i stop on a dime pause I bow to the king for making me sing oh what a thing winner TemariWww@QuestionHome@Com Is this a new form, of a King of Biscuits special!. If it's a form, don't keep it to yourself, because it's wonderful!. I see something like standing someone up on a date, only deeper, something like betraying a secret, or forgetting a wedding!. Maybe that's the picture, a jilted groom at the altar, or perhaps the wonderings of a temporarily sane mind!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This poet a knowit!? Doctor or a proctor!? a muse or bemused!? telling or compelling pray tell perhaps fortell poem du jour or menu main!? What say thee, oh baking soda man!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Almost rappish in rhythm!. I like the form!. Seussish, Sushi, Sashimi, whatever! Rap it up, I'll take it!Www@QuestionHome@Com Frikkin ace :DWww@QuestionHome@Com Great job!Www@QuestionHome@Com I love it!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com That is awesome! I write too, maybe we can share one day! Rock on poet!Www@QuestionHome@Com |