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My Training

Bored
Tired
Attempting
To stay awake
Nothing seems to work
Eyelids become heavy
Fighting a losing battle
Effects of caffiene have worn off
The will to listen has been broken
Resulting in my head meeting the deskWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
7 days of life makes one week

Work
Mundane
Tuesday Too
Next is Hump Day
Thursday Pay Day Comes
Friday finally here
Saturday I’m all for play
Sunday oh no break is over!
Back to work and the cycle begins
Sigh! Now I know why they call them weak daysWww@QuestionHome@Com

I loved this - but, how are you pronouncing your words!?
In my neck of the woods - bored and tired are one syllable, aren't they supposed to be one syllable and then two syllables!?
(Caffeine)
It was the last line that did it - I could almost hear the crack as your head met the wood!. ouch!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice etheree, but damn if you didn't make me tired!. I cannot afford to be tired!. I have a late night of work ahead of me!.!.!.*yawns, curses King of Biscuits and his fabulous poetry*!. Well, thanks for that!. G'night!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Desk is not a soft resting place, friend
Lift yourself and return to life!.
Prop eyelids with coffee cup!.
Don't spill, it may be hot!
Ready yourself now!.
Soon work over!.
Smile now!
Drive home!
Ahhhh!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ha, very good! My 2 year old was up all night with bad dreams (more his imagination running wild), so my face is ready to meet the desk too!Www@QuestionHome@Com

WAKE UP AND GET BACK TO WORK!!! WHAT DO THINK I'M PAYING YOU FOR!! WAIT 'TIL I TELL YOUR MOTHER!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh this is fun! I've GOT to try one! Love the last line, especially the last, definitive word!.!.!.!.desk!. PLOP!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is very good!. I'm impressed with your ability to make me visualize it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com