Naked, golden rays
Hugging me yawning, shamelessly:
The sun shines for me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Hugging me yawning, shamelessly: The sun shines for me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Your breath innocent Against the nape of my neck We embrace the dawn TemariWww@QuestionHome@Com Great!. This is probably a senryu rather than a haiku!. You also have 8 syllables in the second line!. Most are set up with 5,7,5 format!. The words and theme though, are very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Remember when I said I disliked oral sex!? I meant just with you!. I just don't get it you love it when I do that- Wait, no, That's Stephen Where are all these gays going so early!? Oh right, sale at Ikea!. Love the questionWww@QuestionHome@Com A pair of them for you: dewdrops on grass blades beckon rabbits to play on unpainted canvas moist fur brushes stroke intersecting shadow trails across the meadowWww@QuestionHome@Com My dogs woke me up whining to go out to pee it was 6 a m & this i hope for some rain so I can sleep much longer the dogs need rest too lolWww@QuestionHome@Com I feel the warmth, And I want to know: Does the sun know how to be!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Piercing sunbeams shine Enfolding me with warmth A beautiful dayWww@QuestionHome@Com It's too warm outside I should not be sitting here writing a haiku!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it!. I just wish I was clever enough to answer in a Haiku!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Leaving work, suns shines People in bed but not mine hope she comes, in timeWww@QuestionHome@Com god i hate haikus even ones about the sun wait, i just made oneWww@QuestionHome@Com |