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Question: Who joins me for a morning Haiku!?
Naked, golden rays
Hugging me yawning, shamelessly:
The sun shines for me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Your breath innocent
Against the nape of my neck
We embrace the dawn


TemariWww@QuestionHome@Com

Great!. This is probably a senryu rather than a haiku!. You also have 8 syllables in the second line!. Most are set up with 5,7,5 format!. The words and theme though, are very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Remember when I
said I disliked oral sex!?
I meant just with you!.

I just don't get it
you love it when I do that-
Wait, no, That's Stephen

Where are all these gays
going so early!? Oh right,
sale at Ikea!.

Love the questionWww@QuestionHome@Com

A pair of them for you:



dewdrops on grass blades
beckon rabbits to play on
unpainted canvas

moist fur brushes stroke
intersecting shadow trails
across the meadowWww@QuestionHome@Com

My dogs woke me up
whining to go out to pee
it was 6 a m

& this

i hope for some rain
so I can sleep much longer
the dogs need rest too



lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

I feel the warmth,
And I want to know:
Does the sun know how to be!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Piercing sunbeams shine
Enfolding me with warmth
A beautiful dayWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's too warm outside
I should not be sitting here
writing a haiku!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!. I just wish I was clever enough to answer in a Haiku!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Leaving work, suns shines
People in bed but not mine
hope she comes, in timeWww@QuestionHome@Com

god i hate haikus
even ones about the sun
wait, i just made oneWww@QuestionHome@Com