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Question: September Anyone!?
September

Summer, for all the fun it was has run off!.
Evenings are becoming longer,
Parks painted in autumn hues!.
Tempting me to dive headlong into the foliage!.
Eventually, I will,
My nights once hot, now cooled by fall's breath!.
Bringing me restful sleep,
Euphoric dreams,
Reminiscent of my summer nights!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It is so lovely the way the poem comes full circle from "Summer" to "summer nights"!. The images are beautifully painted by your well chosen words!.!.!.I could get absolutely lost in them!. The last four lines are the epitome of September, caught forever in your beautiful words!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love this poem!.!.!.!.it's almost a picture made of words!.
I like the line about tempting me to dive into the foliage!.
When I was a kid, we loved jumping into piles of leaves!.
Thank you for the memories! Star for you!.!.!.!.!.Peace n Smiles:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like this one too, but now I am confuselled!.!.!. I seem to have lost you from my contact list!. Oh, well!.!.!.!. I know how to add you back on!. There may be others gone too, for I haven't gotten notices of their questions lately either!.

edit: Mo BettaWww@QuestionHome@Com

I do prefer the Spring/Fall seasons, and September, I consider to be autumn!.!.!. so !.!.!. yes!.!.!. September, please!


Have an "artsy" day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was wonderful! I love this one so much!. The description of Autumn was beautiful!. me too will be tempted to dive headlong into the foliage!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

What!? You on reconnaissance!.!.!.diving headlong into foliage!? I know its semper fi but isn't that carrying it a bit too far!? lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like your September!. But I prefer the sunshine and flowers!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

From one Marine to another, thats pretty darn good!. I've got a few myself but I like yours a lot better!. !.!.!.!.!.!.!.Semper fi!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is great! I love the "painted in autumn hues" line!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice!. I love all your poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice!.!.!. my birthday is in September!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes!.pleas!.if you can/ very goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

So peaceful sounding!. I'd love to lose myself in this poem for awhile!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Does this mean I must unpack my sweaters!? That was one, quick summer!Www@QuestionHome@Com