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Question: Short 6 lines!?
I use lies to lure the king of an empire
With fortresses built on rocks of hard truth
I don my heideous face with a beautiful face
Of the virginal maiden,the pretty snow white
Had the maker made me an unrepenting devil
I could have closed my eyes,to rest!.!.in peaceWww@QuestionHome@Com


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